Kipo: A Landing Page Done Right. Now: Asking for Your Help with Ours.
I often hear from readers that they love the geeky startup stuff (like this) I write from my own experience with Oh Hey World / Horizon. So here’s another one of those.
I came across Kipo tonight via a posting inside a Facebook group I belong to. I think the landing page is very clear as to what the product is, and why I as a business owner would want such a service. Take a look:
And see the video:
Why do I mention this, and how does it relate to startup life?
I think we have our consumer positioning for Horizon very, very close:
Stay With Someone You Trust. Horizon uses Facebook groups and mutual friends to help you find people and places to stay
Everyone in our 18-30 target market who sees our home page pretty much gets the concept instantaneously.
But positioning Horizon in a business context is a different ballgame.
The main business model we’ve been testing is a $3.99 booking fee plus optional donation back to charity (supplementing or replacing the house gift). Beyond that, we’ve been working on validating an enterprise offering for membership associations (colleges, fraternities, service & religious orgs, professional networking orgs, etc) — and we have work to do positioning the product as it relates to the business opportunity of increasing engagement & community.
Here’s our current thinking of how our product is poised to address a few major pain points membership associations face:
- Engagement – increasing in person friendships by facilitating hospitality exchange, which is the quickest way to form strong bonds among members.
- Fundraising – by tying value creation by connections made within the network directly back to making a donation
- Member analytics to better understand where the network is and where they work/travel
Our current enterprise landing page for membership associations can be seen here:
I noted Kipo as a landing page done well and shared it with the team on Slack (which I still love). Our landing page is most certainly NOT there, in either visuals or written copy. But I’d love your feedback nonetheless. Please leave a comment with any thoughts you may have as to how you think we should improve it. Rip it apart, please. I assure you — I, and we, can handle it.
PS: If you know people who are actively involved with a membership association (particularly if its Peace Corps), work in alumni relations for a university, or just love building community, would love it if you’d put Horizon in front of them and see what they think.
Sam DeBord
Posted at 07:53h, 24 MarchThe verbiage on your landing page reads more like a business proposition paper than a catchy sales pitch. I know that it’s enterprise instead of consumer-direct, but the groups you’re targeting (colleges, fraternities, service & religious orgs, professional networking orgs, etc) are still more casual than the pitch they’re receiving.
Kipo says: You build relationships. We build your network.
That’s relatable.
Horizon says: Community Engagement Platform
That’s white paper material. I’d work on your consumer elevator pitch and just barely tweak it toward the enterprise side benefit.
Drew Meyers
Posted at 10:57h, 24 March🙂
I’ll post a follow up once we’ve tweaked it.
What do you think about: “We bring your community members together in the real world”
Sam DeBord
Posted at 11:05h, 24 March“We put your people face to face. Together, we build your network.” ?
petertoner
Posted at 09:56h, 24 MarchCheck out http://kickofflabs.com/ – service includes A/B testing and viral loops to gain traction …
Bruce Dhara
Posted at 17:16h, 24 MarchHi Drew, I would like to schedule a call with you to discuss a real estate project that me and my team have been working on. You seem to have a wealth of knowledge about the industry, please contact me at bruce.dhara@infilabs.com and I will be glad to setup a discussion and compensate your for your time.
More about us : http://www.infilabs.com
Drew Meyers
Posted at 10:22h, 26 MarchYou can schedule a call with me on Clarity.fm/drewmeyers
Gorton Romeo
Posted at 06:03h, 25 MarchThanks for sharing this information.